2010年9月14日 星期二

Advice Letter

   Dear Advice Column Lady
My name is Alfonso and I have a problem. I asked a girl out, her name is Sandra. i promised that I woud bring an extra bike for her, but, my bike's chain broke, and my brother doesn't want to borrow me his.What am i supposed to do? This is my first date, and i do not want to ruin it. And, Sandra is really cute. I met her because I helped her brother come down of a fence. Well, that's not important. What am I going to do? I don't have money to afford another new bike!
                                      From the desperate Alfonso

2 則留言:

  1. Dear Amber,
    Thanks for writing to me, but that's not important. You should just tell her that you couldn't get the bike from your brother, tell her the truth.Maybe you can just hangout with her this time and maybe get yourself a new bike a while later. I think she can understand how you feel after you tell her what happened.
    from Column Adviser

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  2. Amber,

    This is much too short. You need to try to write about 200 words per journal entry. If you don't start writing longer entries, I'll have to start reducing your points.
    -MM

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